Seeking You Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Seeking You



Wish I were a boat
Paper or wooden
Need to be with
The flow of water
To feel the current
Hot or cool or both
The stream shows me
The way to reach you
I am not tired, I don't
Feel the fatigue and
Uncertainty of a long
And arduous journey
I believe you when
You say you are
The great, you are
The one and only who
Plays with lives of us
So I am surrendering
Like a bee before the
Fragrance of a flower
Take me or leave me
I am just a boat
May fall flat any time
If you wishes so

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2018

(3) I am just a boat May fall flat any time If you wish so....Wow! Amazingly worded and so simple. May you have luck in seeking her. GBU in Abundance!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2018

(2) .If you wishes so....ardently but introvertly worded. That's poetry for. Just as the flow goes and the stream will show you the way to reach her. Wonderful occurrence. Thank you so much for sharing, Anil. Wonderful poem, loveliest rendered. God's Blessings in Abundance, be upon you. Amen. A 10 nd much much more for the vote.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 November 2018

(1) That person must be happy to be sought by you and your heart's so ardent, but careful though. This poem represents the dear poet full of passion behind this poem. WOW! May she be the lucky one and be found. I cite your concluding lines, Anil, I am just a boat...May fall flat any time..........please read (2)

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