Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 507,693 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Seema-Boundary - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I have made net as permanent home
Come across with many people and welcome
It does not me any solution to my worries
As I am in urgent need and in hurry

You seem to be religious
Your statement is really ambiguous
How come you are here for many hours?
Generally relation turn here very soar

I saw her virtually crying and in tears
She had lots of worries and unfounded fears
Her husband was dead for two years
She waited for that sweet voice to hear

I consoled her to be little patient
She must be living in past and not present
It is very difficult to forget dear and near ones
As this feeling can’t be shared by anyone

I am very good at face reading
I have not used it for any kind of trading
It has come through after years of experience
I can go through eyes and submit without variance

I saw her very knowledgeable and bold
She had vast experience but gone very cold
The death of her husband had nearly killed her
She was alone, lonely and so much to bother

I saw deep scars of face which were indicative of great struggle
I could guess she might have passed through ordeals with trouble
She had remained unperturbed but fully shaken
She was not in her control and fully mistaken

She would miss a lunch or dinner
Prepare it for orphan child who lived very near
This was her only satisfaction and aim
She wanted peace for departed soul without name

She was baking enough this before
She discontinued it after his death therefore
She has no where to go but remain in oblivion
This is her own world or you can call it pavilion


Comments about Seema-Boundary by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (1/27/2012 9:15:00 AM)


    a very touchy poem. may God help us all in the time of our need. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2011 9:29:00 AM)


    Oh my GOD......... thanks for this poem and you make me cry again, again and again........., what a wonderful peom
    written by you special for me
    thanks a lot my dear
    i have no words to say....
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, May 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 14, 2011


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