Seneryu Series- My Prism Poem by Varsha M
Seneryu Series- My Prism
Little angel drop
Embrace with love that transforms
Shatter once on ground.
Tiny little angel
Embrace me with love that transforms
Shattering once on ground.
Every drop of rain is a prism helping us to reflect our true self.
The present haiku has a syllable count as 5-7-5.
I was corrected by Michael Jack over Haiku and senryu poetry. I thank him for his mindful enlightenment.
My first senryu, I think.
Photo courtesy pinterest.
Heavy downpour! ! ! ! Rain from the heavens! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Varsha, Congrats for selecting the apt pictures for the fine senryu
This fits in the category of Senryu not a haiku. Haiku is about nature and Senryu is about humans and nature.There are so many forms like Sonoku, Monoku, Trioku. Haiku originated as an opening part of a larger Japanese poem called renga. These haiku written as an opening stanza were known as hokku and over time writers began to write them as their own stand-alone poems. Haiku was given its current name by the Japanese writer Masaoka Shiki at the end of the 19th century.[3]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 3:39:10 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Very beautifully penned. The picture seems to have truly reflected in the lines. Keep it up.