M. Asim Nehal

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Senryu - 13 (Life Is Like Haiku) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

life is like haiku
syllables, childhood- youth-aged
live judiciously

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu - 13 (Life Is Like Haiku) by M. Asim Nehal

  • Sriranji Aratisankar (7/21/2016 5:20:00 AM)


    Well written ASIM. Life is really a haiku. Three stages.We are passing one after another. again 10 for you. (Report) Reply

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  • Indira Renganathan (9/15/2015 3:52:00 AM)


    Precise definition of life beautifully said....like it (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (9/9/2015 11:02:00 PM)


    Beautifully summarized the cycle of life! Great haiku! (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/7/2015 2:52:00 PM)


    Nicely envisioned,
    Loved it
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  • Rahman Henry (9/7/2015 10:40:00 AM)


    জীবন এক হাইকু ।। এম. অসীম নেহাল (Bengali Version) - Bengalized by Rahman Henry

    জীবন এক হাইকু ।। এম. অসীম নেহাল

    জীবন এক হাইকু
    পঙক্তিত্রয়: শৈশব-যৌবন-বার্ধক্য
    সুবিবেচনায় বাঁচো


    *বাঙলায়ন: রহমান হেনরী

    ** Bengalized (Translated into Bengali) by Rahman Henry
    (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (9/7/2015 10:40:00 AM)


    জীবন এক হাইকু ।। এম. অসীম নেহাল (Bengali Version) - Bengalized by Rahman Henry

    জীবন এক হাইকু ।। এম. অসীম নেহাল

    জীবন এক হাইকু
    পঙক্তিত্রয়: শৈশব-যৌবন-বার্ধক্য
    সুবিবেচনায় বাঁচো


    *বাঙলায়ন: রহমান হেনরী

    ** Bengalized (Translated into Bengali) by Rahman Henry
    (Report) Reply

    Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (9/7/2015 11:34:00 AM)

    Awesome.......I am very thankful to you.......

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/7/2015 10:23:00 AM)


    What a comparison! unbelievably true.. childhood- youth-aged....... really life is like a haiku.100 on 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (9/7/2015 10:17:00 AM)


    Lovely Haiku. I'm enchanted with this beauty of thought. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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