Senryu - 204 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 204

Rating: 5.0


running from the death
aura of sovereignty
slaves of rituals

Sunday, October 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,rituals
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 17 October 2016

there is a certain aura of death when we repeat behaviors and patterns of behavior without examination. repetition is not life. generosity of spirit is life. joy is life. love of all creation is life. Senryu is a very vivid and fast-tempo poem form- the more I read them, the more I treasure them. Great write! 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 October 2016

Rituals of the world! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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