Senryu - 203 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 203

Rating: 5.0


from a leaden heart
a tear trundles down the cheek
feeling very light

Saturday, October 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: easy,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 15 October 2016

The tear that hurdled down the cheek should be treated as a pearl, but it is not. A touching write.

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Unwritten Soul 15 October 2016

And i never felt so good but it is now :)

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Sathyanarayana M V S 15 October 2016

Great imagery. A perfect senryu...touching

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