a crying woman -
after a massive earthquake~
on debris of life
The debris of life. Odd, isn't it how 4 words can contain such a massive amount of information and emotion. That is what I appreciate about senryu and haiku forms- -they demand brevity, paring the lines down to the essential but also poetically memorable words. Excellent piece.10+{+++++++++++++++
With the hardships of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Painful sight has been so wisely depicted using the word massive, earthquake and debris. Excellent Senryu shared...10