Senryu - 205 Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 205 Life

Rating: 5.0


a crying woman -
after a massive earthquake~
on debris of life

Senryu - 205 Life
Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2016

Painful sight has been so wisely depicted using the word massive, earthquake and debris. Excellent Senryu shared...10

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Susan Williams 18 October 2016

The debris of life. Odd, isn't it how 4 words can contain such a massive amount of information and emotion. That is what I appreciate about senryu and haiku forms- -they demand brevity, paring the lines down to the essential but also poetically memorable words. Excellent piece.10+{+++++++++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 October 2016

With the hardships of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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