Senryu - 226 Series On Pain Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 226 Series On Pain

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the first drop appears
you are in pain, disbelieve
yet eyes are twinkling

Now I realized
it's not rain that makes us wet
at times emotions.

Extremes of all
Produces the same result
Final conclusion.

Wednesday, November 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2016

Life is full of pain. If we experience life closely then we understand this. Very thoughtful expression this is.10

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M Asim Nehal 01 September 2018

Thanks much.............

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

The pains of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2016

Thanks much my friend Edward....

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