Senryu - 34 (Breathless) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 34 (Breathless)

Rating: 5.0


Slight rivulets streamed
From her cheek down to the neck
leaving me breathless.

Tuesday, October 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 12 October 2021

Great haiku.....thank u, dear friend...

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T Rajan Evol 04 November 2015

Wow good haiku.................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2015

What an amazing expression this wonderful haiku really. Makes the sense of humor breathless. Wise sharing...10

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