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*senryu 5 (Warm Rains)

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warm rains touch my skin:
the ache of your absence comes
to mind and I moan

Friday, May 22, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 27 July 2009

Very nicely done. It leaves me with a hmmm.

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Jack Price 26 May 2009

I like this Haiku Lillian, it is warm and very sensual. nice job.

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