Senryu - 50 (Oasis) Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - 50 (Oasis)

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Oasis is formed
in my deserted heartland
when you see and smile

Sunday, October 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 18 October 2015

'Oasis in the deserted heartland'........ great expression!

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Sanjukta Nag 18 October 2015

Wow. such a beautiful simile. awesome

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T Rajan Evol 18 October 2015

What a haiku from the pen of Master Haiku. Amazing one. God bless u.

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Kelly Kurt 18 October 2015

Sweet and well done, Mohammed

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Loke Kok Yee 18 October 2015

From my heart I tell you, this is one of the best haiku that I have ever read. Thanks.

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

So kind of you, I am happy it touched your kind heart, The beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder....Since you are good you see goodness in others, Thanks again, Sir.

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