M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 164,672 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Senryu ~ 66 (Break Free) - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Shadows of Rivets
covers the fear zone of mind
unshackle them now.

Topic(s) of this poem: freedom, life

Form: Senryu


Comments about Senryu ~ 66 (Break Free) by M. Asim Nehal

  • (12/20/2015 2:22:00 AM)


    Shadows of Rivets
    covers the fear zone of mind
    unshackle them now.........................10+++
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  • Sanjukta Nag (11/3/2015 6:13:00 AM)


    You have revealed a great thing in this short write. Amazing Mr. Poet.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/3/2015 12:42:00 AM)


    'Shadows of Rivets' and the 'fear zone of mind' are great extensions of imagination. Highly meaningful poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rahman Henry (11/2/2015 11:55:00 PM)


    wonderfully composed Haiku. Amazing.... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 2, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 13, 2016


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