Senryu ~ Ambrosia Around Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Ambrosia Around

Rating: 5.0


see those dancing bees ~
when fragrance lingers in air
after blossom bloom.

ambrosia around ~
when ship sails on the high tides
under the moonbeams.

Monday, May 23, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 24 May 2022

Excellent senryu dear Dr. Nehal.

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Ambrosia around....

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 23 May 2022

This lovely poem is a sensual delight. It is in my favorites.

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Deepak S S 23 May 2022

The first one is more towards Haiku and the second one towards Senryu. You gelled them together very articulately.

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