Gold fish swim around
the glass fish tank peacefully
teasing greedy cats
A bouquet of red roses
for his special young lady
instead of a ring
Opt for cloud seeding
to save the withering crops
as rains play truant
A bouquet of red roses for his special young lady instead of a ring ******** Do we see a Journalist here. On target as usual. Nice write.............
Beautiful senryu, Sandra. An enjoyable read indeed. Best Wishes Naseer
These are all delightful and clever too Sandra. I thought the bouquet of roses a little sad, the fish very naughty teasing and the cloud seed extremely original. 10 Karin Anderson
These are three very wonderful and beauifully expressed senryu poems, Sandra, each speaking on a different subject very well. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
lovely sandra...sad for the cat...less valuable roses...cloud seed...wonderful..never thought of it