Senryu And Tanka Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

Senryu And Tanka

Rating: 5.0


1

Wife starts grilling me
Fish pieces jumped from her palm
To peace on fry pan

(Senryu: 5-7-5)


2

Emergency ward
Yamaraj swipes rope machine
Soon soul accepted
An impeccable system
Science wonders at


(Tanka,5-7-5-7-7)

Saturday, July 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2020

Wife Like the furnace Rerolling all iron hubby.... The Tanka.....nice but syllabic problem

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