Some Weaknesses Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

Some Weaknesses

Rating: 5.0


I may be an atheist
Or an agnostic
But,
I wake up on the right side
I enter the places by right leg
I give out anything by right hand
I touch the feet of elders
For a new thing to start;
I stand up in respect
As and when my teachers pass by;
I vacate my seat for elders
When I see them as standees
Don't you think
That some peculiar things
are still deep rooted in me?
Maybe all branches of science fail
To take out such things from me;
These are some weaknesses
Which galvanize my strength!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Love, respect, and sympathy make one's character. And this helps us to live a life, worthy of respect. This is far More important than visiting places of worship or singing of hymns. Great words. Top score.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 15 July 2022

Thank you very much for your encouraging words, dear Unni.

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Humane values and respect, love for mankind stands above all man made customs, rituals and so on.

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Richard Wlodarski 16 July 2022

The implied inferences to the hypocrisy of some religious followers is so eloquently expressed in this heartfelt poem. Not an easy task! Prem, you've passed with flying colours! Congratulations!

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Nabakishore Dash 15 July 2022

Excellent human being you are dear Handed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 July 2022

You're not weak you are decent person that others should look up to Bravo!

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Prem Nizar Hameed 15 July 2022

Thank you very much, dear poet

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Thank you for this brilliant poem, dear Poet Prem Nizar.......10

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Prem Nizar Hameed 15 July 2022

Thank you very much, dear Geeta ji, for your words of appreciation.

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