Lover's Amnesia...
When one's promises leave by
Petal by petal,
The other will feel swelling
The eyes with well of tear drops
(Tanka: Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7)
Thank you very much dear poet friends for your words of appreciation.
Separation is brilliantly depicted in this beautiful Tanka. Well crafted.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great Tanka, top marks.
Thank you very much dear poet friend