Lover's Amnesia Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

Lover's Amnesia

Rating: 5.0

Lover's Amnesia...
When one's promises leave by
Petal by petal,
The other will feel swelling
The eyes with well of tear drops

(Tanka: Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7)

Thursday, December 1, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: separation
David Wood 01 December 2022

Great Tanka, top marks.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 13 December 2022

Thank you very much dear poet friend

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2022

lovely Tanka Bravo!

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Prem Nizar Hameed 13 December 2022

Thanks a lot dear poet friend

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Prem Nizar Hameed 10 January 2023

Thank you very much dear poet friends for your words of appreciation.

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Chinedu Dike 08 January 2023

A beautiful creation nicely crafted with deep insight.

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Rob Lamberton 06 January 2023

You captured this unpleasant experience so beautifully!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 January 2023

Separation is brilliantly depicted in this beautiful Tanka. Well crafted.

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