Lover's Amnesia...
When one's promises leave by
Petal by petal,
The other will feel swelling
The eyes with well of tear drops
(Tanka: Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7)
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Separation is brilliantly depicted in this beautiful Tanka. Well crafted.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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Great Tanka, top marks.
Thank you very much dear poet friend