Senryu: Desire Incomplete Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Senryu: Desire Incomplete

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A poor man sipping
Evening tea; Thought of Biscuit…
Sun dips into Sea!

Dated: 18th Nov,2018.

Saturday, November 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: ironic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Great imagery and a fantastic Senryu.......Since your poem is about relationships Senryu is appropriate.

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2018

Thank you for re-minding me, my dear... With best wishes PC

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