Senryu -Fill ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu -Fill ♥

Rating: 5.0


fill my heart with love
body inconsolable
return those lost moments

Sunday, December 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 17 December 2020

Another great write........thank u, dear friend........anjandev roy.

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Suzon Albert 08 December 2020

Terse and telling. Lovely senryu.

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2020

Regrets, longing and memories how close thry are to us. We want to revisit our past to relish and relive those lost moments, great onr Asimji.

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Pallab Chaudhury 06 December 2020

Nicely penned one.....an urge to get refreshed lovely moment.... Thanks for sharing with us.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 06 December 2020

Body inconsolable Desire uncontrollable Return those lost moments No need for comments Fill my heart with love I will fill yours with joy I must study this senryu poetic art form. I have not understood it. But because of nepotism and camaraderie i give a 5. Thanks for sharing.

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