Senryu - Illusion Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu - Illusion

Rating: 5.0


don't be judgemental
if I fall on drunken road
reflects illusion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2020

Dilemma grows more within a path of illusion. The drunken road is the example. An amazing poem is shared.

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Aarzoo Mehek 23 September 2020

Illusions can be misleading. Very nice senryu. Short and meaningful.5*

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Rajnish Manga 23 September 2020

This indicates our misplaced perception which is nothing other than an illusion. Thanks for the poem.

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Suzon Albert 23 September 2020

Yes very true. So well thought out.

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Zuzu Mutairi 23 September 2020

Wow so well thoughtful poem

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Darren Jkoeryo 23 September 2020

DJ liked the philosophy of life in simple words. admired

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Juhaina Tumlu 23 September 2020

This drunken road is the life's journey where we all are drunken and living in illusion, hope you don't drink prohibited drinks.

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Varsha M 23 September 2020

No doubt being judgemental not good but being drunkard too not wise.

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