Senryu -In Your Absence ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu -In Your Absence ♥

Rating: 5.0


candles set to dance
for another silent night
when you are away

Tuesday, September 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,missing you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 15 September 2020

Beautiful words Sir. Short and to the point.

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Gordon Walter 16 September 2020

Superb poem. Short but very very nice.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2020

Brief but beautiful and meaningful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Zuzu Mutairi 15 September 2020

Candles are symbol of self destruction.

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Poetic Sky 15 September 2020

Candle created imagery. Silent night created another imagery and the parting time created magical effect.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 September 2020

Blooming candle light Rosy night the whole palace None was; but we were

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