Senryu ~ On Window Panes. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ On Window Panes.

Rating: 5.0


I write with finger
to see the outside world
naked translucent.

Monday, May 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 17 May 2021

beautiful I read it again tooo good ur MAN

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Rebecca Navarre 15 May 2021

Very deep and heart moving feel to this! .. Beautifully done! .. And again feelings excellently captured! .. Definitely Wow 5 Stars! ..+++++

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 12 May 2021

Thy finger drawing the worlds on the heart canvas by conscientiousness of thinkinns

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Deepak S S 11 May 2021

All stand naked when we see them through. Great write. MAN

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me poet yeps poet 10 May 2021

YOU ARE EXCEPTIONAL TRANSLUSCENT I WRITE WITH MY FINGER ON THE SAND ALL WASHE AWAY HAND IN HAND NOT ME NOR MY HAND ONLY REMAINS IS SAND

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