Senryu Sea Of Life Comments

plenty in life but mist in sea it takes in season/ bright

plenty in life but mist in sea it takes in season/ bright

High for a season Only for a season!

Soft like downy mist, but when pooled together, massive like an avalanche! There is much depth in this poem!

Soft like downy mist, but when pooled together, massive like an avalanche! There is much depth in this poem!

must say how little this poem is but how big meaning it has.... splendid job ma'am

So many different reasons. You Captured so much in very few words.

So true, so much said in so few words. A great poem.

Life is a graph of ups and downs...lovely imagery.