Senryu Series My Favorite Flower Poem by Heather Burns

Senryu Series My Favorite Flower

Rating: 5.0


Enter my sweet one
love becomes an open door
my heart awaits you

Once again I come
to drink of your sweet nectar
flower of my heart

A lovely red rose
holding fast to a trellis
never letting go

While my love remains
you are my flower of love
passion of my life

I long to hold you
carress you so gently
touch your lovely face.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Inwalked Bud 15 September 2013

This is so beautiful..full of emotion and sweetness..so descriptive in a lovely romantic sensual way! LOVE THIS POEM!

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Valsa George 15 September 2013

A sweet poem fragrant like a rose flower! Enjoyed! !

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Sallam Yassin 19 September 2013

gentle and sweet like rose

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Noreen Carden 18 September 2013

Hello Helen a beautiful romantic poem so well written as always

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Poetheart Morgan 18 September 2013

You are so romantic Poetess! ! ! Simply beautiful! ! !

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Dave Walker 16 September 2013

A beautiful poem, the sweet smell of nature and life.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 16 September 2013

A beautiful rendering of the flow of love. I hope my poem, though a little bit longOde to Rioters will please you.It is a poemI have submitted for the International competition of this site.

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