Loke Kok yee

Senryu-Smoking - Poem by Loke Kok yee

Oxygen deprived
Asthma and emphysema
Premature aging

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Senryu

Comments about Senryu-Smoking by Loke Kok yee

  • Bri Edwards (4/28/2017 7:35:00 PM)

    so, what's your point? someone has to keep doctors busy!

    bri :)
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  • Melvina Germain (11/8/2015 7:15:00 AM)

    I finally figured it out years ago and gave up the beast. It took several of my friends away from me far too early. Excellent Senryu..... (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (10/26/2015 2:03:00 AM)

    Thank God I don't smoke, cause the picture is really sarcastic for the humans! Enjoyed it. very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/25/2015 2:15:00 AM)

    Great Senryu on the risks of smoking! I think this can be used as a logo for anti smoking campaign! (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/24/2015 5:40:00 PM)

    We are all monkeys. : -) Smoking proves it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2015

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