Senryu-Smoking Poem by Loke Kok yee

Senryu-Smoking



Oxygen deprived
Asthma and emphysema
Premature aging

Senryu-Smoking
Saturday, October 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 28 April 2017

so, what's your point? someone has to keep doctors busy! bri :)

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Melvina Germain 08 November 2015

I finally figured it out years ago and gave up the beast. It took several of my friends away from me far too early. Excellent Senryu.....

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Sanjukta Nag 26 October 2015

Thank God I don't smoke, cause the picture is really sarcastic for the humans! Enjoyed it. very nice.

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Valsa George 25 October 2015

Great Senryu on the risks of smoking! I think this can be used as a logo for anti smoking campaign!

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Kelly Kurt 24 October 2015

We are all monkeys. : -) Smoking proves it

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