Senryu: The Game Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Senryu: The Game

Rating: 5.0


old men in the park
gnarled hands move dominoes
overhead leaves turn

Senryu: The Game
Wednesday, December 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mihaela Pirjol 04 January 2018

I was about to say the same thing, and then I saw Tom's comment. The association is wonderful! It is fascinating, how much it can be expressed in just three lines!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 December 2017

Oh I have seen such scenes, u describe it so aptly and poetically in superb wording in senryu brevity wow. Kudos. Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled, saints and sinners/ordinary folks

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tom billsborough 20 December 2017

Brilliant association of Imagery between hands and leaves. Top marks, Seamus

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

Galway, Ireland
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