Senryus - 3 Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryus - 3

Rating: 5.0


Everyone competes
His energies to deplete
Or others defeat?

A fresh cricket match
One untimely boundary catch
Team hopes badly dashed

Starting late daily
Facing the traffic melee
Life remains unchanged

Success is his guide
But it must be bona fide
Else he feels defiled

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

perfect...you have picked from different spheres and it is wonderful

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C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

You have both beauty and wisdom. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Another beautiful poem. Love it.

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Mamta Agarwal 24 May 2009

lovely observations on life, Sandra. some humourous others thought provoking.10 Mamta

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Fiona Davidson 24 May 2009

Great senyru Sandra...well written...Fi 10+++

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