Senryus - 2 Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryus - 2

Rating: 5.0


Bees are a buzzing
Do avoid all that fussing
Fresh honey is at hand

A tiny rain drop
Balancing on a big leaf
Can evaporate

A peach and a pear
Juicy tasty monsoon fruits
All ask for a share

Sunlight gets dimmer
Large clouds on the horizon
Farmers prayer answered

Luscious red apples
Hanging from a GM Tree
Are they safe to eat?

The forbidden fruit
Attracted Adam and Eve
And God was deceived

Saturday, May 23, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: bees,farmers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ANOTHER LOVELY WRITE THE THIRD AND FOURTH SEEM TO HAVE SOME CONNECTION

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

these r just mind blowing.. hav no words just 10++++++++++++++++++++....

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C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

So far I never found haiku an interesting mode of poetry but you evoked my interest in them by bonding them. A feast of the spices of life. Loved them all. Waiting for more of them. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Amazing poem,10++

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Kesav Easwaran 24 May 2009

good works...the last one i liked most

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Fiona Davidson 24 May 2009

Beautiful writing Sandra...Fi 10+++

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