Senryus - 2 Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryus - 2

Rating: 5.0


Bees are a buzzing
Do avoid all that fussing
Fresh honey is at hand

A tiny rain drop
Balancing on a big leaf
Can evaporate

A peach and a pear
Juicy tasty monsoon fruits
All ask for a share

Sunlight gets dimmer
Large clouds on the horizon
Farmers prayer answered

Luscious red apples
Hanging from a GM Tree
Are they safe to eat?

The forbidden fruit
Attracted Adam and Eve
And God was deceived

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

ANOTHER LOVELY WRITE THE THIRD AND FOURTH SEEM TO HAVE SOME CONNECTION

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Priyanka Bhowmick 31 May 2009

these r just mind blowing.. hav no words just 10++++++++++++++++++++....

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C. P. Sharma 25 May 2009

So far I never found haiku an interesting mode of poetry but you evoked my interest in them by bonding them. A feast of the spices of life. Loved them all. Waiting for more of them. CP

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 May 2009

Amazing poem,10++

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Kesav Easwaran 24 May 2009

good works...the last one i liked most

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Fiona Davidson 24 May 2009

Beautiful writing Sandra...Fi 10+++

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