Senryus -8 Poem by Sandra Martyres

Senryus -8

Rating: 5.0


The automobile
Industry is in shambles
It needs a driver

He who jumped the gun
Apparently for some fun
Now stretches in jail

Winner or loser
It should not truly matter
If you played the game

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 24 June 2009

Sandra u are great with words..... refreshing style...keep it up. spare some time to read my poems too.... esp WINGS, LETS DREAM ans SO THE STORY GOES

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2009

i love this economy of words!

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all three were nice sandra...the first had humor...the third had a very good philosophy...playing the game is very much important

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

the last 1's tru.. nice pieces...

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