Sense Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Sense

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I can't make sense of many things,
even though, I Know.
So I swim
upon the petals
of Lotuses.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 03 June 2012

That already make a sense to me, swim as lotuses that's a nice one...a plant that never drown and remain beautiful in any place, ground; water or air.... sense is when we feel inside, not just by the skin so i think what you always done here are make sense and always...it just appear differently when it about the poetry but the meaning and value is there..i believe it! _Unwritten Soul

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