Sun Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Sun

Rating: 3.7


When the sun slaps you
in your face
and turns it red
you say;
thank you
for your warmth
and strong embrace
you have colored me
with your grace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 24 July 2012

Oh that is so beautiful Kasia, short and sweet.

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Hamid Negah 25 July 2012

Kasia, you always refresh my mind, thank you.

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Valerie Dohren 27 July 2012

Short but very beautiful and meaningful.

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Unwritten Soul 28 July 2012

Loved it...you teach us a golden advice here...brighter than the sun

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Sina Farajzadeh 01 August 2012

Wow. Perfet natural poem. I really like it. Specially the idea of slap of sun. I myself used it as a slap of drops of rain. I'd write it in web later. Good job dear friend.

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Randy Hogan 31 July 2012

When the sun raises over a little blue humble planet and frist rays of light kisses your sweet face. GOD will smile for the beauty he has made, when he made you. Lovely write 10sssss RANDY~*~

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you say; thank you... nice one and thanks giving poem....10 you must thank all divine powers, as they unbiasingly favor

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this rubicand encounter.... lit up the dark silence...

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Neela Nath Das 28 July 2012

Novelty of thought.So beautiful expression. The word picture stupendous.In a nut shell---wow!

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