Warm air's gentle flow
Contours silk dress hugging curves
He notices her.
Provocative, but charming. A quality Haiku from a quality poet. Warm regards, Sandra
Sensual. The sensual feel of warm air gently caressing the skin, cold air cannot do that [brrrrrr], hot air makes us uncomfortable [seeking the relief of an AC], warm air [just right, like the warmth of a lover's breath]. Sensual. Indeed yes, the way silk dresses cling here, move there, hug those curves. We women know how to wear the things that whisper to men. Sensual. Ha! I had to giggle at the understatement. Yes, I'm sure he noticed her. Probably could tell you the color of her eyes while he was at it! Enjoyed this haiku, Jim.
A sensational poem of highest sensuous quality, appealing to sensuality of sensational beings. A piece of a gem. X
This is certainly sensual. I can imagine the hugging curves and the atmosphere you have created with so few words. He notices her and I have noticed how well you have written this. 10 Karin Anderson
a sensual poem this is..great imagination! fine write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really nice.says it all.i write haiku, too.gave you a ten...