Sentiments Of Light Poem by Sarah Persson

Sentiments Of Light

Rating: 5.0


On rainbows there's a hint of you,
Each raindrop splashes gold,
The snowy mountains clouds cascade,
My stories here unfold.

Each star that glistens in the sky,
Spells out your name so bright,
And with the moons last shadow's cast,
A haze filled sentiment of light.

Each wind that blows from pole to pole,
Each flower that scents the breeze,
A hint of you is felt in time,
Each essence touched, you please.

With every dune that drifts with sand,
Your name is glistening glass,
And as the heat that shimmers, rises,
The rays of sun still gently pass.

In every way you fill my days,
And every way you gift my sight,
I'll see you, find you, speak your name,
And whisper sentiments of light.

Tuesday, July 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Cantrell 04 July 2017

Sentiments of light, facets of emotion giving colors meaning and permanence, we reap the grace of such reflecting off the sparkly dunes as they are polished with the warm light of our yellow sun, and love is the common thread of your wonderfully written poem my friend! I really enjoyed this! !

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Seamus O Brian 04 July 2017

Deft and precise use of rhythm and rhyme. A sweeping capitulation of love's power to possess us, vividly captured in the details of nature. Excellent writing, dear poet!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Each raindrop splashes gold, .Snowy mountains believe this. Sentiment of light is filled by haze. The rays of sun still gently pass and such passing amazes mind. God fills our everyday in light of his mercy. Interesting poem is very well crafted and shared here...10

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Sarah Persson

Sarah Persson

Wellington, Shropshire
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