Seraphic Aroma Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Seraphic Aroma

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A subtle tenderness is brought up
All plants have twisted faces,
Identification is made for life,
Beauty's glance is enlightened,
Spreading widely light of victory,
God's garden has started smiling,
Greatness of God is adored by all.

Strengthening the moment of joy,
Victor sun has started reflecting rays,
Aroma of flowers is merged with time,
Angelic arrival of day is welcomed,
Wisdom of God has motivated this day,
Pulse of period of poppy is noted,
Sunbeam has shaken smile of love,
Love-beam has bloomed with bile of leaf,
Bokeh is booked under lens of eye.

Despite of demon's violent attack,
Flame of seraphic aroma has burnt
The fire of jealousy of bald tree,
Demon is trying to burn sun again,
By his many vicious violent heads,
But putting his own hand on his head,
He has destroyed himself into ash,
New flame of victory is fathomed,
To wear the top divine crown above,
Sun is in royal procession of peace,
All angels are eager to meet him.

Sun is empowered by God in creation,
Sun is obeying rules fixed by God,
No natural law sun has violated at all,
No greed, no anger, no tension,
No vice has captured tender sun,
Duty is done under righteous day.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,20 February 2019. All rights reserved.

Seraphic Aroma
Wednesday, February 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,humor,metaphor,nature,philosophical
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2017. All rights reserved.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 22 February 2019

A subtle tenderness is brought up All plants have twisted faces, Identification is made for life, Beauty's glance is enlightened, so well description of nature here is wonderfully presented, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2019

Thank you very much poet Muzahidul Reza for your valuable reciting and comment on this poem. Your effort is highly appreciated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2019

Just now I have read a great worthy poem titled, 'Poetry Emotion, '- Poem written by Denis Martindale. This has real deeper emotion and love. Yes, mind is full of thought. Mind has freedom and mind carries double blessing. As per my opinion the poet has expressed this very well and this poem is outstanding fragrant poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2019

I have just read a poem titled, 'Compte Rendu Du Bureau De Poste.(Translation) . - Poem by Michael Walker and commented on this. This poem has real deeper insight. I thank him and appreciate him very much.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 February 2019

I have just read a poem of Aries Profanisaurus and commented on it. The poet has described moonbeam falling on leaves of trees with greater interest. This is appreciated.

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Barium Muserounica 23 April 2019

Feeling subtle tenderness means having communication with cosmic world. Every moment of joy we should feel and strengthen. You are very right. Obeying command of God sun is giving us rays. Under righteous day we should lead and life we should feel. This philosophical poem has greater importance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 March 2019

Thank you very much Aniruddha Pathak sir for your kind visit and feedback. Your effort is highly appreciated.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 March 2019

God's garden has started smiling, Greatness of God is adored by all.... Very inspiring piece well-crafted after a lot of research.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2019

In search of true aroma of poetry I have also read few recently written poems of Bharati Nayak and found uprising trust of her on God. She has realized the greatest affection. Her beautiful poems are motivational poems. I appreciate her effort highly and thank her. Poems of her shine on lotus petals of devotion.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 February 2019

Recently I have read four poems of Dr. Geeta Radhakrishna Menon and commented on these. I have found greatest aroma of devotion dance and music in her beautiful poems and I thank her. I am wishing her all the best.

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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