Set Me Free Poem by Anvita ...

Set Me Free

Rating: 5.0


They ask me the reason

The reason to smile
When the life is so fragile

They ask me the reason
For searching pages
Blank and drawn …

A face in fog
Lost anon

For feeling numb
To stare the tress, the wind
The seen, unseen

Tired of those strident reasons …

The incessant desires
Born in cage
Yet denies
To envisage the reason
In each horizon

Set me free, let me fly
Not the wind, yet alive …

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blessing Ekpe 02 November 2011

keep it, you can do better, you do have a way with words, work on it

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Glad to find something good to read in ph after a long time. Thanks for sharing..

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Ankita Sharma 21 March 2010

good! ...it seems to be quality

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Kee Thampi 17 March 2010

and again I wish you may be hope to be in horizon of dream and set your soul be free The incessant desires Born in cage Yet denies To envisage the reason In each horizon

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Indira Babbellapati 27 February 2010

o, yes...i liked your name a lot...don't ask me the reason, ok? by the way, what does it mean...may i know?

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Anvita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Siddhartha Gaurav 11 May 2012

good one. there was continuation in events going on. that was nice to see

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Ebi Robert 18 November 2011

The display of rhymes trips me.

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Sonali Sings 12 November 2011

The free spirit not bound by any reasons, just living whatever the moment holds for it. Really good write. Enjoyed reading...

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Anil Kumar Panda 09 November 2011

very nice.liked it.keep inking.

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