Anvita ...

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Set Me Free - Poem by Anvita ...

They ask me the reason

The reason to smile
When the life is so fragile

They ask me the reason
For searching pages
Blank and drawn …

A face in fog
Lost anon

For feeling numb
To stare the tress, the wind
The seen, unseen

Tired of those strident reasons …

The incessant desires
Born in cage
Yet denies
To envisage the reason
In each horizon

Set me free, let me fly
Not the wind, yet alive …

Comments about Set Me Free by Anvita ...

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/29/2017 10:20:00 AM)

    A great start with a nice poem, Anvita. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks (Report) Reply

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  • Siddhartha Gaurav (5/11/2012 12:11:00 PM)

    good one. there was continuation in events going on. that was nice to see (Report) Reply

  • Ebi Robert (11/18/2011 10:01:00 AM)

    The display of rhymes trips me. (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2011 12:49:00 PM)

    The free spirit not bound by any reasons, just living whatever the moment holds for it.
    Really good write. Enjoyed reading...
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/9/2011 11:28:00 AM)

    very nice.liked it.keep inking. (Report) Reply

  • Blessing Ekpe (11/2/2011 1:06:00 PM)

    keep it, you can do better, you do have a way with words, work on it (Report) Reply

  • (8/5/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Glad to find something good to read in ph after a long time. Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • (3/21/2010 1:05:00 AM)

    good! seems to be quality (Report) Reply

  • (3/17/2010 12:28:00 AM)

    and again I wish you may be hope to be in horizon of dream and set your soul be free
    The incessant desires
    Born in cage
    Yet denies
    To envisage the reason
    In each horizon
    (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2010 12:27:00 PM)

    o, yes...i liked your name a lot...don't ask me the reason, ok? by the way, what does it mean...may i know? (Report) Reply

  • (2/27/2010 12:26:00 PM)

    set me free? who does it? there are no reasons for many things under the sun...smiling at the fragility of life needn't have any reason...we willingly allow ourselves to be put into cages...don't we? (Report) Reply

  • (2/25/2010 11:41:00 PM)

    such a beautiful piece. very inspiring and well written! my favorite part was the last stanza. 'Set me free, let me fly/Not the wind, yet alive' absolutely lovely :) (Report) Reply

  • (2/17/2010 3:25:00 AM)

    i like your poem, its quite expressive and also it makes me inspire to write a poem like looking forward to your another poem...: -) (Report) Reply

  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/16/2010 4:21:00 AM)

    It's a nice poem that bridges the gap between desires and realities of life, like your name, Anvita. Keep your desires and dreams alive and keep writing.
    Best Wishes.

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  • (2/15/2010 11:54:00 PM)

    it is a poem which is appreciated at two levels, , its overtone and undertone celebrates the freedom, one at personal level and another at creative level.thanx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 15, 2010

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