Amy Marie

Rookie - 489 Points (July 13,1992 / United States)

Seventeen's Day - Poem by Amy Marie

Seventeen today arrived –
In my night-bed with life revived.
She had put Sixteen to rest –
Last night after passing Energy's test.

Seventeen beside me lay –
This morning after Bright's delay.
Fireflies from her path flew –
But my Age still grew and grew.

Since then few hours fled away –
Yet seem only slow to 'quickly' go.


Comments about Seventeen's Day by Amy Marie

  • (2/10/2010 9:22:00 PM)


    I can really relate to this poem,
    it reminds me of the early morning i turned 15,
    i was sleeping then i saw a flash come from my phone, i opend it and it was 5: 05 in the morning. The exact time i was born.
    Really nice work.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2011


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