! ! ! `shadow And Beyond… 11.! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! `shadow And Beyond… 11.! ! !

Rating: 4.7


`SHADOW AND BEYOND… 11

Hello ness dissolves the clouds
Impales rage by subtle words
as sun cleans darkness from night
clipping slowly edges of blackness.

does light enquires upon night’s peek
dream pegs out in mind by tizzy feel
lest passion may design the desire
queries yet unanswered by the quest.

do we ever feel to be fine always?
worry when niggles calmness within
is that crux of matter to delve out
exact way of wading path around?

do we know the path of redemption?
life spins through plexus of mysteries
when and how, what comes in-between
quintessence lays back by complex dynamics.

as objects hold on helix of time and space
as entwined by torque of turns opposite
light and darkness clone shadow and beyond!
happiness pairs sadness, love as hatred.

if we ever pull well by both sides of coin
it begins well that ends well by existence
I still never remember spell of queasiness
how is then life by magic of ethereal squeak?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepti Agarwal 31 October 2008

good questioning here....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 June 2009

'as objects hold on helix of time and space as entwined by torque of turns opposite light and darkness clone shadow and beyond! happiness pairs sadness, love as hatred.' An excellen work with imagination along nice idea. You always craft your composition with nice zeal.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

great artwork! ......logical......thoughtful......It shows how deeply you can think....amazing! ...10++++

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Ramesh T A 06 November 2008

It reminds me of Shakespeare's idea of life that life is a stuff made of dreams and rounded of by a sleep. It is strange as man himself is a quintessence of precious dust, you see!

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Reshma Ramesh 03 November 2008

wow.....a beautiful one dr........well penned

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Anjali Sinha 02 November 2008

a beautiful piece-- a masterpiece I would say deep thinking here and yes--- redemption-- a good glossary of words too. Great write Dr. Kar---keep writing--I love your works. A++++ and 10+++++as always regards anju

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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