Shanghai Breeze (Ii) Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Shanghai Breeze (Ii)

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The luggage is not heavy
But the heart is heavy

When the snow falls here
Jasmine is still aromatic there

I miss your little rabbit teeth
Do you remember my small dimples?

I have no luggage at present
You, all about you, fill my heart

Wednesday, October 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 03 September 2017

So eloquent in so few words.A beautiful love poem, thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 08 July 2016

HI cigeng, The luggage is not heavy But the heart is heavy Without uttering a word about it, you have very deftly created the context of parting from a beloved. This is what poetry is all about. Exquisite. Loved reading.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 April 2016

But the heart is heavy! Nice piece of work.

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Cigeng Zhang 06 April 2016

When you say goodbye to someone you love, the heart is heavy. Thank you for your comment!

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