Shattered Poem by Valerie Dohren

Shattered

Rating: 4.9


Do not leave a heart yet shattered -
Shards of glass upon the floor
Lying there, profuse and scattered,
Splintered soul, bereft and sore

(Broken hearts can n`er be mended
In a moment`s fleeting time
Months or years they need be tended
`Fore they rise again to shine)

Serve it well with tender feeling
As it be your very own
Thence it would require no healing
Nor yet dwell for`er alone

Love and care is ever needed
Words and actions given free
Faithfulness should too be heeded -
Hearts belong to you and me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 10 November 2012

This poem is like a song of the nightingale in my ears It is like a budding rose in front of my eyes Lavender to my nose Really superb poetry, Valerie, I love it

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Stevie Taite 09 November 2012

I adore this, and especially the last Stanza (i hope i interpretted the meaning correctly)

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Robert Green 08 November 2012

wonderful.......................................

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Shattered for a while... Then bounces back a life solidly structured on love, care and mutual concern. Valerie, your experiences in life have made you a counsellor for broken hearts too.

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John Brown 05 November 2012

So true Val. I have experienced very bad times that I thought might break me, but, as you put it, my heart rose again to shine.

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Kevin Patrick 12 December 2012

A Celeste was heard in the background as I read this, together they worked as love birds. Let us learn to fix hearts from your talented hands. Another lovely read.

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Josh Dinkin 15 November 2012

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.- Albert Einstein. I believe you are one of the few Val.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 November 2012

Delightful and heartwarming affections excellently conveyed.

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Pere Risteski 14 November 2012

great expression of emotions

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Bev Haigh 12 November 2012

really enjoyed reading this Val, yes a broken heart needs time indeed. Thanks for sharing. Bev x

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