She 02 Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

She 02



I know for sure, that
Even with wrinkles she will be
Still beautiful

Saturday, January 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 23 January 2018

....Even with wrinkles she will be Still beautiful...appreciated the beauty of expression! Thanks for sharing this beautiful senryu with us..10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2018

And most important comment mine side: Most beautifully described with great tenderness.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 14 January 2018

The SHE you wish to be old with till death does you part.... Tremendously pictured in the clearest way in brevity. Absolute a brilliant registration, a loveliest poem. A TEN and much much more!

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