She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not

Rating: 4.5


She loves me,
She loves me not,

As I pull each petal
From the daisy that I hold,
So much I do need her
Please end the way I wish,
And I'll keep on praying as
My future is foretold.

She loves me,
She loves me not,

Maybe that's the way
My life was meant to be,
I can only hope
And wish for things to change,
And to lift the spell of this
My endless misery.

She loves me,
She loves me not,

I know I couldn't face
Yet another day alone,
The petals almost gone
And I cannot bear to look,
As my fingers tremble now
It chills me to the bone.

She loves me,

She loves me not,

She loves me,

She loves me not.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 24 March 2008

Loved the ending, although sad. Beauitfully written piece and so pleasing to find. Very good indeed. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 19 March 2008

I pictured you, quite literally, sitting in a feild quietly contemplating over this Brilliantly done Love duncan X

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