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She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not - Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

She loves me,
She loves me not,

As I pull each petal
From the daisy that I hold,
So much I do need her
Please end the way I wish,
And I'll keep on praying as
My future is foretold.

She loves me,
She loves me not,

Maybe that's the way
My life was meant to be,
I can only hope
And wish for things to change,
And to lift the spell of this
My endless misery.

She loves me,
She loves me not,

I know I couldn't face
Yet another day alone,
The petals almost gone
And I cannot bear to look,
As my fingers tremble now
It chills me to the bone.

She loves me,

She loves me not,

She loves me,

She loves me not.............

Comments about She Loves Me, She Loves Me Not by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

  • (3/13/2012 9:14:00 AM)

    am Miss Serah, i saw your profile today, on this when i was browsing looking for friendship and i became interested, in having a good relationship with you.and i would like to know more about you. It will be a pleasure to read from you, if you wouldn't mind, love has nothing to do with colour, language, race and distance, what do you think and feel about love and to be loved? you can reach me on my id, ( so that we will know what the future holds for us, and also we are going to each other more and more for further comminication, I want you to know that real love cares and
    i await your reply

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  • Ernestine Northover (3/24/2008 11:40:00 AM)

    Loved the ending, although sad. Beauitfully written piece and so pleasing to find. Very good indeed.
    Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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  • (3/19/2008 3:15:00 PM)

    I pictured you, quite literally, sitting in a feild quietly contemplating over this

    Brilliantly done

    Love duncan X

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 9, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011

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