'Shhh' Poem by Bernard Snyder

'Shhh'

Rating: 2.7


It seems I'm wearing an ugly mask
and playing a different part,
I want to show you off to my friends
but we have to hide in the dark,
those who knows criticize our judgements
and think we've lost our minds,
they look at our age difference
and say this can't be by design,
to some degree they have a point
but life has different stages,
what you and I seem to enjoy
other folks think is crazy,
so now we find ourselves being looked at
because you left the door ajar
you asked other people their opinions
and things got way too bizarre,
so now, the one thing we can do
being that everyone else seem to have lost it,
in order for us to keep enjoying the ride
let's keep what we do in the closet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
La Donna 13 May 2020

Woo wee! ! You're someone special!

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Unwritten Soul 11 September 2011

People maybe want to response on this but you 'Shhh' them... Time to keep your 'Shhh' to shhh for a while and listen to this and keep 'Shhh' Bernard Snyder, The mask what it seeing here not a true appearance...but people judge it first The age you think it's obstacle not a barrier...but people think it too So whatever you wear your mask, it have wrinkles of age and time...people will keep judge whatever it looks like they havent got it...So time to push your soul to live the life not just Shhh by people judge coz it is the purest part we must proud...I mean what is important is your heart and soul...It derive you a true words to listen whatever they said Shhh the fear and i finished talk and i will shhh now :) keep bright as you are! _Unwritten Soul

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