Shhhhhhhhhhh! (For Laura) Comments

So exquisite poem; enjoyed reading from the beginning to the very end. Bravo

You are such a damnably clever writer Donall Dempsey! Every one's a pearl.

Ah this is so sweetly and beautifuly done and such fun all at the same time. It does it indeed bequile but is totally without guile. A delight...a beautiful delight...like the answers to some old Norse riddlesa! A thing of beauty and... love GinaXXX

Shhhhhhhhh...don't tell anyone but this is just so simple and powerful. A real little beauty The run ups to the final line are great and made me laugh...it's just so plain and simple and yet...it hits ya. A lovely lovely love poem that delights and bequiles. I was charmed. love Dee Dee

Wonderfully simple and profound. An adorable poem. Love it. F

Oh, the power to be a leaf hiding in a tree...you clever one...how your mind intrigues me...leading me ever onward....