Shhhhhhhhhhh! (For Laura) Poem by Dónall Dempsey
Shhhhhhhhhhh! (For Laura)
Like a tree
hiding in a forest
like a leaf
hiding on a tree
like a river
hiding in an ocean
like a wave
hiding in a sea
I see you see
through me
and my carefully
camoflagued love.
So exquisite poem; enjoyed reading from the beginning to the very end. Bravo
You are such a damnably clever writer Donall Dempsey! Every one's a pearl.
Ah this is so sweetly and beautifuly done and such fun all at the same time. It does it indeed bequile but is totally without guile. A delight...a beautiful delight...like the answers to some old Norse riddlesa! A thing of beauty and... love GinaXXX
Shhhhhhhhh...don't tell anyone but this is just so simple and powerful. A real little beauty The run ups to the final line are great and made me laugh...it's just so plain and simple and yet...it hits ya. A lovely lovely love poem that delights and bequiles. I was charmed. love Dee Dee
Wonderfully simple and profound. An adorable poem. Love it. F
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Oh, the power to be a leaf hiding in a tree...you clever one...how your mind intrigues me...leading me ever onward....