Shooting Star Poem by Maria Yang

Shooting Star

Rating: 4.3


Good fortune a shooting star they say,
bringing hope it may.
Little did they know
from Death's hand them were sow.
Each streak a finishing end,
yet not one story we comprehend.
Perhaps not so terrible thing is Death,
Who steals Life's sweet, fresh Breath.
It is He,
keeping Time going the Key.
Without Life,
there is no Death's strife.
Without Death,
people know not of Life's precious Breath.

Saturday, December 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abhimanyu Kumar.s 05 December 2017

Key is in us but the master is out today. Good description

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Chinedu Dike 03 December 2017

Beautiful philosophical piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in good diction with insight. A witty reflection on life set aside for honest contemplation. Thanks for sharing Maria.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 December 2017

The hidden pains behind glory is nicely depicted in this poem Welcome to Poem Hunter

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 December 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Maria Y. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Chinedu Dike 02 December 2017

An insightful piece of poetry nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Maria.

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