Shooting Star Andmanhole Poem by Indira Renganathan

Shooting Star Andmanhole

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A dying shooting star
Falling down on earth

With no such intention though
He falls to create a crater

Where no life sprouts
Too wide too far too long
Isn't that earth's fate?

On the road
Being dug a manhole
Certainly not for a
Toddler

Matchless match though
Isn't that the uncaring fate

Saturday, July 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 05 July 2020

Every fall is a lesson for others to learn. A poem which deals with the dark face of the society where people are trying to pull down others when they they find difficult to rise above others. Superb poem nicely written.

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 July 2020

Fate I think, is nothing But man made forlorn grave Star of life If does not shine in time No need to sad Need to try differently, wisely To reach the great......

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