Short Poem 7 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem 7

Rating: 5.0


O dear spider
make your strongest web
when sun is sleeping

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 04 May 2019

Splendid poem Mohammed! I can see the spider weaving

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

O messy spider make your longest web when the dark is fall

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Soran M. H 24 August 2020

deep provoking idea, always in darkness the truth would be lost, evil appears and people struggling, thanks for share with us this gemstone, it deserves 10+and into my treasure chest

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Mahtab Bangalee 10 May 2019

under the night dark you can weave the living home you the art of stitch- (spider)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 May 2019

A meaningful haiku is touchingly delineated. Let the spider web. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 May 2019

This humorous poem is excellent that talks about spider and its web. Sun's sleeping motivates mind of spider. Thank you very much for share this excellent poem...10

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