lying on the icy mountain
when I recall our past
emotionally, the ice melts
by the anguish of my love.
Nice poem akin to a tanka. What it does not have in the strict format of the Tanka, it makes up for in passionate imagery. Beautiful, just beautiful.
Thanks much.Mini T
brilliant write... Thank you for sharing with us.10+ PC
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Snow filled mountain expresses emotion. Recalling the past lost love is memorized and revived. An excellent poem is well penned.10