Short Poem -Lost Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Short Poem -Lost Love

Rating: 5.0


lying on the icy mountain
when I recall our past
emotionally, the ice melts
by the anguish of my love.

Thursday, February 7, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 February 2019

Snow filled mountain expresses emotion. Recalling the past lost love is memorized and revived. An excellent poem is well penned.10

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Mini Troubadoura 07 February 2019

Nice poem akin to a tanka. What it does not have in the strict format of the Tanka, it makes up for in passionate imagery. Beautiful, just beautiful.

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2019

Thanks much.Mini T

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Pallab Chaudhury 07 February 2019

brilliant write... Thank you for sharing with us.10+ PC

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M Asim Nehal 07 February 2019

Thanks much PC..

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