Lawrence S. Pertillar
Showing Warmth Is Not A Myth - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar
'Rumors about me being,
Obnoxious, rude and tempermental...
Have been over exaggerated.
When I talk over someone...
I'm helping them maintain their enthusiasm,
And the bonding that comes from the honesty...
Of such rare an beneficial times.
When these moments come to award us.'
I like the way you have written this!
Let me read it over a few more times...
To get the feel and 'tone' of it!
I should be able to add some sincerety!
Look over the one you wrote for me,
Entitled, 'Showing Warmth Is Not a Myth'.
That one went right over my head.
There are too many typos!
It has to be perfect.
Especially if you expect me to display any of it!
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